Sunday, July 1, 2012

Coming August 2012 - Guardian Angels

Book 1 of the Guardian Series


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Do you Love your Editor? - Show it!


I thought I'd write about my own personal experiences again - this time regarding editing.
This will prove invaluable to all you new and aspiring authors.

I'm not going to refer to the main points we should all be aware of - Head Hopping - Commas - "Bodifying" as I call it. (If you don't know what those terms mean yet - research it! You'll be glad you did).(A good reference source can be found through the Ruby Lioness Press website).
No, I'm trying to write about it from the perspective of how we - the authors - hopefully view our editors.

Remember - IF we are fortunate enough to get a publisher to accept our work, well done!
BUT
Think of it from their perspective for a moment...

When a publisher accepts our work, they are taking a chance on us.
Simply put, their business is to earn money through/with us. The better the stories and authors they have on their books, the better it is for everyone involved. But those standards don't just "miracle" themselves into place. That's why we have editors.

The editor is there to make both parties happy - the Publisher and the Author.
I view the editors I have as a godsend - as someone who will esure my story is the very best it can be. That means the Publisher will be happy to continue accepting my stories, because the public will love reading them!

And to be honest - I think I NEED that help. Let me tell you why...

Although I live in the Greek Islands, I'm from Britain. I'm well educated - so yes - I have a pretty good grasp of english and the points of grammar required to put the concepts I have into an interesting format.
BUT, as I've learned, there is quite a difference between English/english and American/english. (Which is by far the largest target audience).
Additionally, I have to overcome the hurdles "conditioned" into me by life experience.
In the UK, we tend to use/employ "run on" sentences quite a lot! It's natural, it's accepted and we don't think twice about it...(but I do now..ha ha)...
In the military & police, we tended to use certain phraseologies that WE understood - but most of the reading public will not.
These habits are reflected in my writing.

The editors I have been blessed to work with, have spotted those tendencies and have helped me start the process of eliminating them from my manuscripts.
NOW - this is important...
When they spotted these -( lets call them "errors" )- and made suggestions to change/revise/or restructure an aspect of my story, they were not criticizing "ME".
They were not trying to take away my "voice" or my style or personality from the story.
They WERE/ARE trying to use their vast experience to make my story as polished and as attractive to the reader as possible.

Throught that process, they are helping me - as a new author - learn, adjust and improve - so, as I continue to write, I naturally begin to incorporate their suggestions into future work.
That's good for me, because it enhances my stories from the word go.
It's good for the publisher, as they get to see the standard of my work improving.
It's good for the editor too - (who you hope to work with in the future) - because 1. It shows they are doing their job well, and, 2. They'll enjoy working with you in future knowing you are someone they can trust to incorporate their guidance into the manuscripts they spend a lot of their personal time examining.
AND YES
It sometimes means we have to work hard! But so what? We - as authors - benefit from it.

So, how can we show the editor we appreciate them?
My personal experience again - from an editing side.
While waiting to find a publisher, I'd almost completed the second novel of the Guardian Series, (Guardians).
Ruby Lioness Press very kindly - "took a chance on me" - and offered me a contract for "Guardian Angels". So, not long after accepting Guardian Angels, "Guardians" was ready. Then I completed a short story that became my first actual release - "Fairy Tail". Then I completed a short story for the Halloween anthology, "Love Bite". Basically, I'd submitted two novels and two short stories in a relatively short period of time.
When the editing stage of Fairy Tail arrived, my editor (No names in case they get embarrassed) made my first experience quite painless. Although it was a short story, she picked up on my tendencies to use "run on" sentences and certain phrases that might not be understood and helped me correct them. I really enjoyed the experience and used what I learned in my latest projects. However - remember, I'd already submitted 3 other works by this time.
At the moment, I'm in the editing stage of Guardian Angels.
As this is a different genre from my first release, I have another editor who also picked up on my weaknesses. GOOD!
Thats shows our editors have high standards and are excellent quality control filters.
Now, because this manuscript is a major novel and requires a lot of hard work it got me thinking....

How can I show my editors/future editors that I appreciate their hard work and I'm someone they can look forward to working with?
How can I show Angie and Marissa I'm someone they should continue to take a chance on?

Simple answer - work WITH them.
As I complete the edits for Guardian Angels, I'm obviously incorporating what I'm learning into current projects (Fallen Angels & the new Cambion series). However...
How could I put myself forward as someone to work with if I just left, eg, Guardians as it is?
I submitted it some months ago - BEFORE - going through the actual Publishers Editing process.
My current editor for Guardian Angels is someone I hope to work with in the future.
How do you think she'd feel, having completed my 1st full length novel - only to find those same errors repeated in the 2nd work because I couldn't be bothered to incorporate what I've learned into it, because...
"Oh, I submitted that a while back. It doesn't matter - my editor will do it for me"
Do you see?
That's why I'm currently revising my own master copy of Guardians from beginning to end.
YES, it's more work for me. YES, it means I have to put Fallen Angels and the Cambion novel on hold while I complete the revision.
BUT - as an author - it shows the "team" you aspire to be part of that you are a team player!
When I resubmit it, the difference will be clear. (And the professional potential this will generate for the future will pay dividends)
Hard work pays off.
In the future, my standard of work will be all the better for it. (Something every author/aspiring author should aim for).
That will please my publishers - AND - the editors assigned to me. (Again - something we should all desire).

So - all you new and/or inspiring authors out there...

I suppose - what I've been trying to say is - working closely WITH your editor involves much more than tapping an "accept" button.
Listen to what they have to say.
Take on board their suggestions and constructive criticism.
Incorporate their refinements into your current and future projects.
Put the time and effort and work in - NOW!
Because if you do...your own distinctive voice & style will come to stand out from all the other wannabe's and you'll be known as an author who aspires to - and achieves - the highest standards.

Do you love your editor(s)?
I know I do!
Because if I listen to them - one day - everyone will know my name!

Tuesday, June 26, 2012

Thank You


Just a post to say "Thank You" to:

Marissa at Sizzling PR

For the recent book tour promotion of Fairy Tail.
It was great fun completing the interviews and - amongst other things - it has broadened my list of new friends.
Some even completed reviews on the story which were very encouraging to a "first timer" like myself.

Thank you too to Angie, at Ruby Lioness Press

For managing to arrange the KDP select dates during the actual promo.
It resulted in quite a number of hits on both my site and blog which have helped raise my profile ahead of the release of "Guardian Angels", my first major work - and what I hope will be a successful series.

AND
I musn't forget an extra special "thank you" to Lacy Wolfe - my editor for "Fairy Tail" - who made it a little gem to read.

This happy bunny is now going to frolic in the sun... Have a great day everyone.

Sunday, June 24, 2012

Book Babe Review


http://wwwbookbabe.blogspot.gr/

Please stop by and take a look at this (and other reviews) at Book Babe.
My grin cannot fit on this page.
Thank you :)

Friday, June 22, 2012

Important Advice for Authors - and those who want to be.


Listed below is some honest advice to those genuinely looking to overcome "hidden" hurdles to getting your book published.

Take it on board -

It can be intimidating to put your work out there for someone to judge its merit and profitability, there are some things that you can do that will really hurt your chances of getting a contract or even any feedback at all. The following are a couple things that could cause you to fall at the first hurdle:

  1. The absolute worst thing that you can do is ignore the submission guidelines. They are there for a reason—to explain to you how the publisher would like your submission to look! This isn’t an instance where personality or being “different” is going to shine.  The publisher asks for submissions to be formatted and emailed in a certain way so that it makes their job easier. If you are interested in working with them, please read their guidelines. If you have a question about something you have read, email themfor clarification.  They don’t bite…
  2. Did you edit your email, blurb, synopsis, and manuscript before sending it? Did you also run it past another person who has good grammar skills before sending it? If not, do not press the send button! Poorly written emails are a good indication that the rest of your submission is poorly written as well. Weeding through a page of text, let alone an entire story, that does not follow proper grammar rules or includes misspellings every other sentence is torture to someone who is actually interested in what you have written. Get an editor, critique partner, beta reader, or even a retired English teacher to look over your work before submitting it.
  3. If you are waiting to hear back about your submission, please don’t complain about it in social media venues. It is okay to be anxious and impatient, but keep it to yourself, rant to your family, or check in with the publisher by email.  Remember - publishers receive a large number of submissions each week and pride themselves in giving each the attention they deserve. Smearing their name because you are not happy with our turnaround time ruins their credibility and makes them "irate", especially if you link your comment to our Facebook page or Twitter account. Yes, they pay attention and read. Be professional and don’t burn that bridge.

So there they are—three of the many ways to turn off a potential publisher before you have a book contract in hand.

Next time - More important advice about pleasing a VERY important person. Your Editor!

Free this weekend (June 22nd - 24th) on KDP Select - Amazon


Fairy Tail - published by Ruby Lioness Press - available from Amazon.




For the third year running, a ritualistic serial killer has struck again in the week leading up to Halloween, leaving a gruesome and bloody trail in his wake.

It’s the same every year. One murder every day, until his quotient of seven has been reached. Butchery doesn’t begin to describe what happens to those who he gets his hands on. Then the killer vanishes – only to return twelve months later as merciless as ever.

When he does resurface, he appears to strike randomly and at will. It cannot be established exactly how the killer selects his victims, or why. As such, the detective leading the case is no closer to discovering the identity of the ruthless predator than he was when the slayings began.

It’s only when the detective gets an unexpected break that things get interesting…
Stop by and grab yourself a copy!

Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Today's Book Tour and Review


Fictional Candy
Fictional Candy


Please stop by at Fictional Candy to see their review and interview.
Some of the questions were quite different from normal and this was an interview I thoroughly enjoyed.

Take care
Andrew P Weston